Leon 007
MemberOvomorphNov-05-2013 8:49 AMBasic Plot
1. Elizabeth Helps David rebuilt a basic Torso then enters Cryo she’s not feeling well, David builds a new Body salvaging alien technology.
2. Elizabeth Shaw goes into cryo sleep for the Journey to the Origin of the Engineers planet.
3. Crossing the Universe takes Decades , David is left to his own devices as he experiments with the contents of the ship and the creatures in the tubes. He builds a make shift Laboratory, one of the scenes he removes a vile of Blood from Elizabeth.
4. Elizabeth Asks David to wake her on arrival to the Origin. They arrive to a dramatic scene of an enormous planet , every inch of the planet has been built up.
5. The Ship is Automatically Guided to a landing Bay. The Engineers know the origin of the ship and they Quarantine everything. Destroying the canisters and stripping down Elizabeth and David Quarantine them as well.
6. The planet they have arrived at is the primary breeding post , the Engineers have opted for mass production of themselves.
7. Elizabeth and David are captured and taken to the head scientist of the Quarantined division.
8. Ironically the head scientist has birth defects and dramatically aged.
9. David translates as the scientist Engineer explains the reasoning behind their motives and their current predicament , his birth defects seems that he’s also an outcast of his own perfect Engineering Race. Hence being head of the Quarantine section.
10. The Scientist takes a sample of Elisabeth’s blood and steps inside the super computer , the scientist has a sample of the Original Engineers blood. The computer shows the Evolution of the human species from the Original Engineer to current Elizabeth Shaw. A couple surprises are shown in the sequence of our evolution to current man. ( women ).
11. The super computer is the Engineers Solution to a dominant species; the Super computer maps the entire DNA sequence. A process even David finds fascinating ,a process he thought was impossible. The Engineers experimented with spreading their DNA and watching evolution. Constantly experimenting the Engineers found the evolution process to slow , they concentrate all their energy on building the super computer.
12. 2000 years have passed from where Elizabeth and David encountered the engineers last post , the parasite post. The Engineers where disappointed with the outcome of their DNA distribution experiment. Hence the outcome of the human race, the Engineers feel they are superior and decide to wipe out all the experimental races.
13. The parasite posts are a failure, the Engineers collect the worst parasites from each planet and genetically enhance them. The parasites have matured to attach weaker races. The parasites quickly adapt to attaching the Engineers. The Failure of the parasite post push the Engineers to build the super computer. Building a supper race enhancing their DNA to avoid the parasites and adapt to the new planets. The Engineers plan to occupy each planet. Hence the manufacture of the breeding planet.
14. The Engineers scientist lets the computer complete the scan of Elizabeth’s DNA, The Final creature to show up on the screen is the Squid , Then the Face slug creature and finally the Alien.
15. When the scientist notices the last creature he’s intrigued but not necessary surprised.
16. David breaks free from his restraints and attempts to attach the Engineering scientist , the scientist steps aside and pushes a button opening a massive blast door. David releases Elizabeth and they venture into the foreign planet leaving the Quarantine section.
17. Will complete the story at the end of the week. Give me feedback on if going in the right direction. Sorry for the points , find it easier to write this way. Regards
18. When they leave the Quarantined section they pass a long line of Engineers statues. David stops and reads the inscriptions, each Engineer that gave up his life to donate his DNA to a new planet. David walks to one of the statues , looks back at Elizabeth “ Here stands our Father “ as he looks up at the enormous statue. Elizabeth looks up and whispers her statement, “ I was expecting someone to nurture us protect us , not this as she looks around “ . At the foot of each statue is the round vile that holds the liquid that erodes the body. David takes a Vile.
19. The planet has been growing and changing for Millennium , the Engineers have built on-top of their Old architecture with the new. David and Elizabeth wonder through the bottom of the enormous constructions. David is in fascinated by the Architecture , Elizabeth looks at the distraction of their relics. Elizabeth can see a resemblance between the Engineers and humans. We both devastated the past for the benefit of progress.
20. David finds a terminal, he plugs into the Engineers system. He pulls up the schematics of the planet , David and Elizabeth stare at the revolving layout. The Centre of the planet has been carved out leaving only the revolving core. Elizabeth figures it out before David as she whispers , “ It’s an artificial womb” . David acknowledges her assumption and looks at the figures. The liquid resembling an ocean is the amniotic fluid.
21. The Engineers while developing the super computer , built an entire planet for their mass occupation of the planets they want to Host. David talks out loud as he scans the information. Each batch will exceed a Billion being’s , each generation designed to occupy a certain planet. David speaks his mind , “ The perfect race , the perfect occupation plan “ . Elizabeth is emotional as she sits down, the vastness of the planet. The super computer, the ever improving Engineers. She can see the outcome for Earth.
22. The light Globe flashes red as David pulls out his coms, they’ve been detected. They move on deeper into the Maize. There is a endless stream of container ships delivering proteins for the artificial world womb. David and Elizabeth bunker down in an abandoned building , David stands at the entrance while the sun is setting. David talks out watching the sun set “ IS this what you expected from GOD , from our Fathers “ , Elizabeth doesn’t answer. The camera pans out showing the thousands Cargo ships and the planet as the Sun sets.
23. David goes in search of food leaving a small torch / light with Elizabeth. Elizabeth crawls into a corner , she’s cold. The Quarantine left her with minimal cloths , she holds her abdomen showing her pain.
24. With the sun setting the environment changes. The temperature drops and the wind picks up. Elizabeth crawls deeper into the building to get away from the wind , her small light barley lights up the room. Then she discovers she’s not along.
25. Jotted this down last night will write ending over the weekend , Enjoy