Excerpt from my novel

Excerpt from my novel

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 Just a small excerpt from my novel no action sadly but it does introduce some characters its still a rough copy so its not great and there is some language and a drug reference As I approached the man who had just mugged an innocent woman he looks up and sees me”Hey ******* get out of here if you know whats good for ya”he pulls out a knife i laugh and say”You really want to try your luck with that tooth pick”he replies saying “Jack what was the Germans plan for The Battle of The Bulge.” “Umm Excuse me”I say”Jack Answer The Question!” I woke with a start and looked up to see Coach O the history teacher”Um they stopped radio traffic sir.”He glared at me”Correct”he says “Now class get out your books and turn to……”i Already doze off.the day goes fast mostly because of my day dreaming and im walking home from school with the guys”Did you see the ass on that new chick”says JB”yeah she's fine” says Collin “I've seen better” says jake “like who” I say “Hailee Dike” he saysBut she's flat as hell”says JB he then turns to me and says”So who do you have the hots for Jack” None of your business”i growl. i never like jb he was like a red headed snake in the grass or in my words a total dick.”come on who is it” says Collin “Fine its Ana Barrot”I say.”No way you could tap that”Says Jb”Screw you”i say even though he's right Ana is a thick blond with eyes the color  of the ocean.Im 263 pounds with messy dirty blonde hair and hazel eyes and chubby cheeks.i realize there still talking why I'm tinkling about Ana”So who's up for a blunt” says Collin a short chubby kid with a bowl haircut always covered with a hat”.”not me” says Jake “i quit that **** a long time ago”Jake is an athletic mixed kid that is on the football team is highly against any form of smoking or drinking.yeah i think ill pass too”I say having also been clean for a few months.’Ill go for it” says jb”of course you would” i think to myself but in only 24 hours i will wish i would have took that opportunity because in that time my life will be changed forever

         

   

"i dont know what weapons will be used in world war 3 but i know what wil be in world war 4...sticks and stones"Albert Eienstien

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