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MemberMothra LarvaeJun-21-2014 3:57 PMDreadma
Descrption:
A dragonic kaiju that was made out of the very DNA from Godzilla himself. Razor sharp wings on its back, scales like Godzilla (dark reddish black mix), Godzilla's dorsal spines on back (like Kiryu-Goji's only darker in tone), Long muscular arms with knife like talons on each finger and toes, head strongly ressembles Grand King Ghidorah only coverved with a strange crowned structure kinda like Gyaos. Long tail that ressembles Godzilla's. Pulsating crystals on his elbows and knees.
Power Descriptions:
Hyper Breath- A beam that surpasses Godzilla's by 100%
Larva spit- A cruel yet useful gesture. With producing born to fight Larva to attack and aid there master
Super Sonic Mind Ray- Sound waves of sonic booms blasting anything on it's path. Temporally brainwashing other Kaijus.
Blades- Able to enhances it's claws and nails and turning them into a huge blade.
Organic shared Barrier- While being attacked, this move can be performed, perfectly portecting it from harm.
And more
Behvaior: Dreadma is a sadiscit beast, he enjoys killing, is bloodlust hasn't been seen before. Yet, he is haunted by his past life which is Gorjira. Bothered by the spirit of the first Godzilla. He's quick to act even when outnumbered by an army of monsters.
History/Bio: Dreadma was Japan's first result in creating a "Bio-Weapon" to combat Godzilla. With planting control chips in his brain, G-Force thought they had the ulimate weapon. That is until Mothra declared war on the human race as Dreadma awakened Godzilla who attacked the US. But when the chips in Dreadma's brain dissolved...only time will tell if Godzilla or Mothra have the power to stop him.
Dreadma was supposed to have two fanfics.
1. His birth and battle against Mothra and Godzilla. Sadly, both monsters were no match for this clone behemoth.
2. Mothra summons a signal to contact all monsters of both earth and space. Every kaiju from the Godzilla movies band together against this beast. Many of them die in the process.
even the powerhouse kaiju get a good beating.
There's even a point where Gigan is all beat up. Ghidorah approaches him, and they become one. Turning into Cyber- Ghidorah.
Super Godzilla is involved.
Destroyah gets his ass handed to him.
In the first minutes of the battle... Aquatic and any monster that can swim, kaiju like; Hedorah, battra, Titanosarus, Ebirah, Dagarah Manda, Zilla go after Dreadma underwater.
Within seconds, the water starts to flicker with beams. Later, the water starts to boil. Flushing out of the sea was Dreadma with chunks of Ebirah on his mouth.
So much more but I don't want to spoil anything.
This is an idea I had since 2012. It's basically the Bagan vs Godzilla of all of my fanfic ideas. And it bothers me a bit.
So what do you guys think?
The Weaver
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-21-2014 6:11 PMI've been writing stories for a long time, and what I've learned is that it is important to always have a group of well established and polished characters. Monsters are all in all just big tornadoes with feelings, and unless those feelings are as complex as human ones, you should stick with people's point of views, no matter how cool those monsters may be.
It is not wise to place kaiju above human characters as importance, kaiju are a part of the setting and not the cast. And while it is fine to create a setting first, I'll need to see your protagonists to judge the story.
But for setting-wise, I personally feel that there are too many kaijus. And that it feels crowded, as if they're coming out of nowhere. That is my opinion.
