Evan123
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 10:08 AMWell, I'm currently creating a fictitious sequel to Godzilla and I would love your opinion on my proposed story!
A massive cocoon is discovered in an underground cave system in South America and scientists from all over the world descend on it. While testing it the organism within stirs and begins to hatch! It is revealed to be the same species as the two in the first movie, this individual however, morphs into a queen, far larger than the others! She destroys the caves and disappears into the Amazonian wilderness while simultaneously releasing tons of radiation into the atmosphere! As radiation continues to seep from the caves for reasons unknown, seismic activity on the pacific coasts begins to rise! Soon multiple M.U.T.O. organisms are emerging from their subterranean lairs to feed on this new found food source! Gojira still fails to appear however and humanity cowers as we believe we are alone. But as civilisation falls to it's knees, gojira emerges from the depths and is not alone! A war of titanic proportions is waged as forces of nature clash and humanities faith is decided!
I hope you like it! I decided to envision the original M.U.T.O.s as hive based creatures and below are some other castes from a would be colony!
Another possible solider type!
Possible queen design but not certain.
I hope you enjoyed! I thought the two in the first film could be workers, male and female workers that breed for the hive while the queen only births once and that is to the future queen!
King Of The Monsters
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 10:16 AMBrilliant idea. Im guessing by the "Not alone" bit you mean godzilla has brought friends such as Anguirus and Rodan. however i think you could have a more different and unique Monster For Gojira and His pals to fight. Maybe it could be some sort of tunneling insect, or a giant aquatic Monster that hunches down on al fours and maybe uses his fins much like Titanosaurus. And the queen? Epic idea although not entirely original i can image A ginat muto with eight legs "and" huge wings Which is taken down By Godzilla and His pals just By the Skin of their fangs.
Altogether, Yes i would love to see this.
Gojira2K
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 10:16 AMYes this actually does sound good. Can't wait to read it.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
King Of The Monsters
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 10:23 AMJust To say on your Muto classes. They are all brilliant but I think you could work on the queen. Im thinking Tendrils That come from her chest, maybe a shield like head much like the Alien Queen from "Aliens", Some wings on her would be a nice touch and also feel free to borrow Parts from other kaiju,Some spikes would look cool and just out of the blue, When Godzilla Blasts her With Atomic Breath, She absorbs it and Fire Red enegry from her mouth.
Evan123
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 11:04 AMThanks guys, KINGOFZEMONSTERS, no when I say he is not alone, I mean he has surfaced with others of his species. I don't like the idea of toho monsters in this new franchise. I'll work on those mutos aswell!
Evan123
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 11:06 AMOh and KINGOFZEMONSTERS, I have designed over 30 new and original and often quite different muto species for this, they will certainly not all be the same!
Linkzilla
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 11:37 AMHive-based monsters are so incredibly overdone and boring. I was very relieved when I saw the movie that they didn't go that route, and just made them more "ordinary" creatures that just happened to have an insect-like appearance. If they were retconned to be cliche bee/ant bug monsters, I would be very dissapointed.
King Of The Monsters
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 12:05 PMEvan123- Very nice to hear about more then 30 new speciese of muto! Holy shit humanity is gonna get their asses handed to them. But the more godzilla's idea I hae to disagree with becuase of one problem, and that is how will the Actual Godzilla be identifiable from the other Godzilla's. If you dont like the more Toho Monstrers idea that is perfectly fine, I dont know how that bothers you though, is it because you cant realy see them re-lived becuase you only see them as rubber men in a suit? If so Check this out, its by a guy called vcubestudio's who re-modernises Toho kaiju to make them look like they could fit in legendary : http://vcubestudios.deviantart.com/art/Legendary-Series-Rodan-437341573
I have supplied the rodan one, but too the right there are some more, thanks for the update though.
Evan123
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 12:42 PMLINKZILLA-well that wasn't very nice, I asked for your opinion but I didn't ask to be for my story to be insulted thank you very much, Oh and by the way there are only one species that are hive based, all the rest arrested solitary Orr have a mate! KINGOFZEMONSTERS- well I would imagine he could be adorned in a multitude of scars and possibly be larger but yes I see where your coming from. I just think that new monsters are more exciting, some Toho monsters would be incredible to see but even if they change the design you already know what's coming and new monsters a expand the roster aswell!
It doesn't matter anyway, I don't think I'll post it, people don't really like seemingly apart from GOJIRA2K and maybe yourself, maybe it's the hive thing. Ah well, I tried.
King Of The Monsters
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 12:50 PMDont give up my friend! Infact i must say im now a bit inspired to make a fan-novel myself and you dont have much of a choice on were the Muto's are going to come from. Space: Well Muto's do loo alien but i wont fit. The Sea: Not much point as godzilla comes from there and underground: in my opinion thats the best fit becuase the Muto's do seem cavernous. Dont just let one persons opinion bring you down and decide to stop and thats all I can say realy. Godzilla Being bigger and having Scars, okay not a bad choice, but maybe you can modify the new gojira's. They maybe have smaller spines, longer snouts etc. Im very interested in your work and I aswell as many others would love to see this released.
Evan123
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 12:56 PMYa, your right! I'll continue it and actually yes, the idea of altering the others would be perfect! Gojira himself could look different due to the bombardment of nuclear bombs and many other possible factors! Thanks again! I'll work more on their origins and the finer details of the story and hopefully release it soon!
King Of The Monsters
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 12:58 PMBrilliant to hear, and maybe when im working on my one I would be more then happy to let you help me try to do plot, characters etc etc.
Evan123
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 1:02 PMI would love that! I'll PM you soon and maybe we can work on something together, you never know!
King Of The Monsters
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 1:07 PMEvan123- Already working on it! Just got the title and a ruff plot idea in my head, ill be making a discussion on it in just a second.
Evan123
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 1:12 PMCool, I'll be sure to read it!
Ruins72
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 2:14 PMWow, these actually look pretty cool! Do you mind if I draw some of these and then show you? You did a great job.
Oh and do you mind if I offer a little bit of criticism? I hope it doesn't sound like I don't like them :/
I assume you're going for same head and general body traits/structure as the movie versions? They made it a point to give their limbs and muscles sharp, angular forms and these look just a little flabby.
That and their back fin (on both forms) starts at the base of their neck and ends about 2/3rds to half way down their spine, more prominently on the female.
One final thing, the eyes are pretty close to the tip of their upper jaw, not their mandible. I don't know if you were going for that level of accuracy or were just playing with their anatomy though :/
Again, I mean no offense :3
Evan123
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 2:21 PMThank you! Ya feel free! i was kinda going for that actually, I wanted them a bit different but I hope you still like them!-RUINS72
Evan123
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 2:22 PMThank you aswell RAZER!
Ruins72
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 3:01 PMEVAN123 - Of course I do! Not only do we need more MUTO goodness, we need more high quality designs like this! I'll draw the soldier one since it's my favorite, and then I'll scan it and post a link. Keep doing these.
And for creatres that are made of pretty hard lines, it's pretty hard to draw them and make them look organic. The artists who designed these things did one hell of a job
Evan123
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 3:02 PMYa, they were incredibly designed! I absolutely loved them! Looking forward to seeing your art!
Ruins72
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 3:03 PMOh, and I tried drawing the male MUTO from memory, I did okay but i missed or forgot a LOT of details :/
But here it is: http://ruins72.deviantart.com/art/MUTO-wip-456013682
Ruins72
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 3:04 PMI can't edit my previous post D:
but that one's unfinished
Evan123
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 3:05 PMThat is very cool...definitely keep it up!
Ruins72
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 3:07 PMokay, does the soldier have wings too? and what are those ridge thingies on the side? I wanna get the details right o.o
Evan123
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 3:13 PMAmm, okay, the wing is kind of encased in an exoskeleton like structure if you can see it. It's sort of hard to explain but if you draw it as you see it I'm sure it will turn just as I envisioned it and don't be afraid to make your own contributions!
Evan123
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 3:18 PMOh, and if you could just give me a bit of credit aswell for the designnthatbwould be greatly appreciated, I've had some issues before.
Ruins72
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 3:28 PMOf course, yuo just want this screen-name or do you have a deviantart or something I can link to?
Evan123
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 3:30 PMI don't have a deviantart but you can just put up my name, Evan hadnett, anyone can look for me on Facebook, I live in Ireland and I'm 15.
kaijudinosaurfan12345
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-24-2014 3:44 PMwhat if not only mutos came out what if shimoura from godzilla awakening came back. and what if the writers threw in a few old toho monsters and if we're going for a new godzilla why not add godzilla jr or a female godzilla. or at the very least we could have a sub-species of godzilla like minilla or godzuki or even zilla.many animals have sub-species that could hunt the mutos or other threats. or at the very least say that genectic engineering is something that shouldn't be tampered with you could have orga or even biollante as a symbol of that. i do like your ideas and i have a name for the muto queen gigan