I new to scified: I am writing a novel about kaiju

Sorry about the seriously long wait on the novel. My new name is Tysaurian0.1 now. I was pretty young when I was on my other account, so the novel description really didnt make sense when I posted it. Anyway the novel is going pretty well just editing a few things here and there and decided to let a few people read what I had so far and had very very good reviews, such as very engaging, well detailed, well written, and very interesting characters they can relate to. The novel has an official name now, "The Trougera Chronicles." Trougera is the main Kaiju character. I'm now almost finished with it so if you have any questions about the novel, you can just respond on scified or my email address : tysaurian@gmail.com

"As the emerald demon rises, man and beast flee for their lives, not daring to challenge it. For those who try, their outcomes are a horrible demise. It leaves nothing but death, destruction, and anxiety in its rampage for those who have sinned and passed great harm against him. Man prays for the creature to never return, but their orisons are never answered, for more of the same judgement and punishment from its past torture lasts. Survival, Vengeance, and Slaughter is the monster's only purpose."

- The Trougera Chronicles

Well here is the plot. 

The Trougera Chronicles is about how the threat of a dangerous interstellar cloud had just passed earth after an entire week of being clouded and the after effects begin to change the environment and DNA of certain animal species, growing them to great size. Now called "daikaiju" they begin to destroy cities and fight each other out of territorial instincts. Years of humanity battling against these beasts to protect their countries, the General of North America, General Mason Otonashi wishes to destroy one daikaiju he believes to be the greater threat to North America, Trougera. This daikaiju was the 3rd to be discovered and is by far the largest. Another daikaiju has also threatened the states, Kaijrin. Also nicknamed "The Rogue" this daikaiju destroys cities and towns not for territory but for the pleasure. Not that he has permission from the United Nations and with the help of his lead marine, assistant, and entire base, he plans to lure both daikaiju to their deaths.