Sorry guys my dad got angry at us and I can't play the computer for the whole week! But anyway here's chapter 11 plus Patch's mate is named Carrie Sky and Linda stalk a Triceratops in a clearing grazing without noticing the pack.Sky charge at the herbivore the Trike turn around only to see a big claw slash both of his horns off.Then the disarmed dino feel a sharper pain on his neck.Linda carried the Trike in her jaws and throw him.Hitting head first on the ground breaking the neck killing the used to armored beast.The two tyrannosaurus began to take a bite out of the dead Triceratops and began to eat their fill.Meanwhile.... Carrie and Patch are having time with each other by fishing contest near a lake the goal is to catch the biggest.Patch stand still on the lake and saw a big sawfish almost as tall as Patch (16 meters) The Spino lunge at the fish catching it in his jaws but stop struggling when Patch stomps at the fish.Patch felt accomplish and ran to Linda but she got a Sarcosuchus in her jaws almost twice as big as the sawfish.Patch drop the dead fish and said "you win".And the pair enjoy a fishy feast.
Good chapter. Mostly some punctuation errors. Easier to follow though.
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