In the Epilogue of my story, I think I made it so that an upcoming sequel would be obvious. The story will be called:
Prehistoric Future: The Legacy of Raptor401
or
The Legacy of Raptor401: The Next Generation
PLEASE TELL ME WHICH NAME SOUNDS BETTER
This story takes place when all of Thomas's experiences cause him to go insane, and he creates a new generation of dinosaurs because he has no more friends. But what he is doing is illegal since Area 401 has banned cloning and making dinosaurs. SO he has trouble keeping these things a secret. But all secrets are revealed someday, and something goes horribly wrong and unexpected.
That's basically it for now. This story might take several days to be posted.
Please leave a comment on your thoughts on what you would like to see in this story.
And here is a bunch of random facts from the last story
1- I was originally planning to kill off Spike and make Raptor401 the remaining survivor, but too many people wanted Spike to live, so I decided to let him live.
2- I was planning to make Stardust a love interest for Raptor401, but I am not good at writing romance and I just felt like making Stardust a b*tch.
3- I was planning on killing Thomas and let Levine live, but I thought the story would be better if Thomas was the one who went mad.
4- Levine is named after Richard Levine from the book version of The Lost World, which some people already know.
5- There are some flaws of this story that make it inconsistent. One is that if you read the prologue it tells you that your name is changed when you work at Area 401. However, in the flashbacks, Thomas and Levine have their names. Did you catch any flaws in this story?
6- I was planning on making it so Raptor401, once he lost all of his friends, run off into the wild, and then tell his story of survival. But instead about writing a survival story, I wanted to show a story about the consequences a man faces when he messes with Mother Nature, which is what Thomas realized, but he hasn't really acknowledged fully.
7- I was planning on making this a comedy story and making Raptor401 some funny guy wearing sunglasses, but I decided to make this a sad story.
8- THE ONE AND ONLY REASON WHY THIS STORY EVEN EXISTS is because I wanted to create my own "trademark." A lot of users have their own imaginary "pets" or "dinosaurs" in their stories. I wanted to make it so that Raptor401 would live on, with his story to be endless, but I instead changed my mind.
9- I am planning on making this one whole trilogy. This is not official, for now, though.
ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
Thanks to these people for proofreading some chapters:
- Primal King
- Mr. Happy 9097
- Gojira2K
- x_paden_x
- Elite Raptor 007
And a thanks for everybody else for reading this story!
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