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My story Feedback

Scified2014-02-14 21:48:14
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This was the feedback from the first segment of my story:


Svanya, Primal King, Gojira2K, Paden, TheDinosaurman, and Mr Happy said it was really good AND unique, which is what I was specifically aiming for!


-Some one (I will not reveal who they are) told me I may want to use a proofreader, which I asked Primal King to be myproofreader, which he was EXTREMELY happy and honored to do! (Primal King you are AWESOME! =))

- Someone said my story was a bit far-fecthed, which I already knew. I will try to put a strict limit on making the story far-fecthed so the story manages to saty enjoyable.

That was it, feel free to tell me any improvements I could use via a comment or preferrably a Personal Message.

Written by Raptor-401Published on 2014-02-14 21:48:14
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3 Fan responses to My story Feedback


2KAdmin4301 XPFeb-15-2014 2:46 AM

Even I need a proofreader when I post news, so don't worry about it! Just keep writing and you will get better and better! You did great! :)


NoobMember0 XPFeb-15-2014 3:00 AM

I'm not perfect by all means, but I try to make news interesting for the readers here at scified. I never studied writing in college, music and fine art painting was my focus. I suppose anything is possible, you just got to go for it. My father once told me, "one piece of the pie" concerning my goals, and how to achieve them. Small steps raptor401, small steps


2KMember3687 XPFeb-15-2014 2:51 PM

Thank you for the tips!!!

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