Alien Movie Universe

My synopsis & final scenes for Paradise starring Arnold Schwarzenegger

3770 Views11 Replies
Forum Topic

ArnievsParadise

MemberOvomorphAug-12-2013 4:28 PM

[i]3 years after the events of Prometheus... The head of the newly conglomerated Weyland-Yutani corporation (Peter Weller) has sent rescue ship \\\'Magellan\\\' (onboard - Marines, scientists, etc) to planet LV233 searching for what happened/why The Company lost contact with Prometheus. Arrives at the planet, dropship of space marines find crashed Juggernaut ship, Prometheus wreckage & lifeboat - dead engineer, uncover Shaws log/destination, relay info back to the ship, then are attacked by giant 25ft ultramorph (deacon) and other horrific Gigeresque creatures (morphed from the black goo like the worms - huge things as they had 3 years to mature). Creatures kill nearly all the marines. Onboard Magellan the WY exec in charge of the mission (Cillian Murphy) orders the Captain (Val Kilmer) to leave and follow Shaws course to what she believed was engineers home planet...Back on LV233 angry surviving Marine leader (Arnold Schwarzenegger) repairs the downed engineer ship and sets off in pursuit... Nothing can prepare them for what they will find in the darkest corners of the universe...[/i] 20th Century Fox presents�..A Scott Free Production...A Ridley Scott Film� [b]Paradise[/b] - Starring Arnold Schwarzenegger, Cillian Murphy, Val Kilmer, Gal Godat, Peter Weller, with Michael Fassbender, and Noomi Rapace Rated hard R/18 Tagline - [i]Some answers are best left unknown...[/i] -[b]final scenes[/b] General Max Schaefer of the Special Forces Space Marines stands bloodied, his fatigues torn to shreds revealing his muscular physique, atop the ancient gigantic Pyramid construction complex at the centre of the vast ruined city on the engineers crumbling homeworld. His team long dead, the captain/scientists/Company executive (the latter revealed to be an android) from the Magellan all slaughtered by the legion of huge ultramorphs that overran and wiped out the warring engineer race eons ago, and just minutes ago the recently discovered Dr Elizabeth Shaw (who had been revived from cryosleep as her vessel crashed landed on the planet while she slept) violently killed by what she called \\\'The Creator\\\' - The last engineer who Shaw insisted on awaking from stasis despite Schaefers strong objections. Her screams of [i]\\\'Whhhhy?!\\\'[/i] lost in the thundering black lightening storms above. He waits anxiously, looking up at the powerful beam of light that shoots from the pyramids peak through the dark clouds, high into the heavens [i]\\\'He is here\\\'[/i] Davids head calmly remarks from the top of Schaefers backpack.... [i]\\\'Whuair?!\\\'[/i] shouts Schaefer, squinting in the relentless rain that pours down, his grip tightening on his machete, [i]\\\'behind you..\\\' [/i] David responds Schaefer turns and sees the towering 15 foot marble white engineer approaching purposefully...Michelangelo\\\'s statue come to life.. Schaefer quickly takes off his backpack and prepares for combat, as Davids head watches intrigued. [i]\\\'Cman! Cman! Lets doo diss!\\\'[/i] screams Schaefer. The Creator withdraws his sacrificial sword as the explosion of another volcanic eruption sounds in the distance over the screams of the multitude of ultramorphs now ascending the base of the complex hundreds of feet below Sparks fly as the blades strike.. [i]\\\'Nyahggah!\\\'[/i] Schaefer grunts out, his aged but still powerful body reeling from the force of the first blow. [i]\\\'What dee *beep* are yoo!?\\\'[/i] The last engineer follows up with a volley of high powered blows, Schaefer can only defend as best he can from the onslaught of the towering God until eventually his machete shatters and he falls back exhausted. The engineer slowly prepares for the final blow, its cold black dead eyes impassive as it looks upon the inferior being. Suddenly a 25ft ultramorph rises behind the engineer and promptly rips his head off. The final member of the race of Mankinds forefathers - Gone. Schaefer quickly jumps up and grabs his backpack. He runs to the far edge of the pyramidal complex and looks down at the horrific xeno army approaching below...then turns to face the giant alien that killed the engineer which has turned its attention to him and is preparing to attack... Davids head commiserates from atop the pack [i]\\\'never mind sir you have fought most gallantly, there is no shame in death..\\\'[/i] [i]\\\'*beep* yoo tin man!\\\'[/i] he quips and reluctantly pulls out the Detonator from the pack, holds it in his hand and prepares to press it when suddenly... a drop ship zooms in from above (cue Horner blast)..a chain ladder lowered from the base Schaefer turns and breaks into a run as the ultramorph beings its charge. He leaps off the building, catching the ladder as the ultramorph leaps after him, grabbing onto the back pack, hanging on there for eternal seconds,[i]\\\'Nyahggah!\\\'[/i], before the pack breaks sending the alien and Davids remains falling into the marauding mass below... [i]\\\'good journey General Schaefer\\\'[/i] David calmly says before the interior jaws of an ultramorph silence him forever.. Schaefer wearily climbs up as the drop ship veers off above. inside he collapses and looks down at the huge biomechanical building where mankind was conceived, now overrun by the huge unstoppable alien creatures. He presses the detonator. The pyramid and all the surrounding ones in the area go up in a huge nuclear explosion... Now inside the ship he enters the cockpit and sees Helen (Gal Gadot), the 25 year old raven haired pilot - along with him the last surviving crewmember of the rescue ship Magellan [i]\\\'Welcome aboard General\\\'[/i] [i]\\\'Thanks, for a moment theair I was starting to worree\\\'[/i] [i]\\\'I had to wait until there was an opening in the storm.\\\'[/i] She hesitates... [i]\\\'Did you find Shaw?\\\'[/i] [i]\\\'Shes dead..They all dead..its all bull$hit..all of it..\\\'[/i] Silence for a few seconds.. [i]\\\'You know I never did leurn yor last name\\\' [/i] Schaefer says.. [i]\\\'Ripley\\\'[/i] she smiles The drop ship heads up to the Magellan in obit of the dead world...the plume of the nuclear explosion visible in the outer atmosphere....the secrets of Mankind�s origins forever lost....

11 Replies

FREEZE!

Co-AdminMemberOvomorphAug-12-2013 6:36 PM
[center] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/uTsZphF.png[/IMG] [/center]
[url=http://www.madmax4-movie.com/]Visit the Mad Max: Fury Road Forums today![/url]

Diplomat

MemberOvomorphAug-12-2013 7:56 PM
get yuoor ass to Paradise! ...dooeet, dooeet naaoww!!
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/gpC37.jpg[/IMG] ...when your marshmallows are WAY over there.

DenzelTH

MemberOvomorphAug-14-2013 4:37 AM
I dunno if this is a joke, but casting Arnie now,he'd be better as Wehlands foreign descendant of the Industry,but theres no neeed. He's already dealt with a Predator. It would be like getting Robert Downey Jnr to play Batman after all those Iron Man.
\\\" I Want To Go Where They Come From\\\"

ArnievsParadise

MemberOvomorphAug-14-2013 4:39 AM
Various nods/homages/connections to certain films: -uncovering the incredible secrets of mankind but being unable to stay long enough to look at/understand them before everything goes to pot = similar to the end of the Indiana Jones films, various X Files (incl the movie), BSG-Lost Planet of the Gods -Rescue mission to find out what became of first team = Beneath Planet of the Apes, 2010, Aliens, Event Horizon, Mission to Mars, Sunshine, People That Time Forgot, Jurassic Park 2 -find the heroes of the original movie, only for them to die soon after = Beneath Planet of the Apes, People That Time Forgot -“Cman doo it/WTF are you/Its all BS” = various Arnie Predator lines -‘good journey’ = Prom David -Marine massacre - Aliens reactor scene -David in backpack = Empire C3P0 -Last stand battle atop a pyramid building as aliens ascend = AvP flashback -mano e mano Arnie vs. giant alien end battle = Predator -inadvertently saved at the end by an even more deadly threat = Jurassic Park -Engineer head rip = Prometheus David -Grenade suicide = Aliens Gorman -Drop ship rescue before suicide = Aliens Ripley and Newt rescued by Bishop -alien hanging on to main character before falling thing - Aliens, A:R -big nuclear blast destroying everything - Aliens end ( and Alien, Predator, AvP 1/2, Terminator 4) -Last name reveal of Ripleys mom = Aliens Hicks/Ripley deleted scene (also quite a few films now are doing the name reveal twist - Dark Knight Rises, Skyfall, Star Trek Darkness)

ArnievsParadise

MemberOvomorphAug-16-2013 5:01 AM
IMDB style Trivia for Paradise : -the eighth film in the Alien franchise (if one takes into account the AvP films) -James Horners second score in the Alien franchise. -Russell Crowe and Kurt Russell were considered as back up choices as the head Marine before original choice Arnold Schwarzenegger was cast. (reshoots for the filming of King Conan had made his participation in Paradise uncertain) -Michael Biehn was considered as the Captain of the Magellan before Val Kilmer was cast -Harrison Ford and Sam Neil were considered as Yutani before Peter Weller was cast (Weller had been rumoured for the Yutani role in AvP before the role was written out of the script) -along with Bill Paxton and Lance Hendrikson, Arnold Schwarzenegger has now appeared in films from the Terminator, Predator, and Alien series. -Ridley Scott and Arnold Schwarzenegger previously came close to collaborating on I Am Legend and Terminator 3. -James Cameron was approached to co-write the film but due to his commitment to the Avatar sequels could only offer advice and ideas. He is listed in the credits as executive consultant. Cameron had originally planned to work on a proposed Alien 5 with Ridley Scott and Arnold Schwarzenegger in the early 00s before Fox decided to go with Paul WS Andersons AvP. -setting the film post Alien Resurrection in the 24th century and having Sigourney Weaver as Ripleys clone discovering Shaw and the engineers homeplanet was considered then rejected in favour of setting it several years after the events of Prometheus -a time travel element of having the 'Magellan’ end up back in time leading to a battle on board the original derelict from ALIEN was considered but was also rejected Spoilers (The trivia items below may give away important plot points): -the idea of Arnold Schwarzeneggers character being a descendant of his character in Predator came from the idea of casting Michael Biehn as Corporal Hicks' father. (which also led to the idea of the navigator being revealed to be Ellen Ripleys mother). -Yutani (Peter Weller) briefly mentions the Tyrell Corporation in the opening scene of the film, officially connecting the Alien universe to Blade Runner (there were discussions of doing this in Prometheus but the idea never made it to the final film.) -when the WY scientists begin searching one of the pyramids on the engineers home planet they briefly discover what looks to be a room full of skulls. One skull looks to be that of a Predator. This is a nod to the end scene in Predator 2 of the Alien skull in the trophy room.

DenzelTH

MemberOvomorphAug-16-2013 9:35 AM
Getting a bit deep there pal. Arnie 20 year ago, then maybe there'd be a slight chance, but no one wants to see guns in Space. I wanna see some weird aliens, and atleast an attempted explanation of Prometheuses mysterys. Also David will be likeable i think.
\\\" I Want To Go Where They Come From\\\"

brego

MemberOvomorphAug-17-2013 12:15 AM
I like all of these ideas except for one. Arnold Swartzeneger can't act and will ruin the movie. Sorry

SpellboundSynapses

MemberOvomorphAug-18-2013 12:12 AM
This is the best Paradise fan script I've read so far.

ArnievsParadise

MemberOvomorphAug-18-2013 4:21 AM
thank you

ArnievsParadise

MemberOvomorphSep-08-2013 10:09 AM
teaser poster [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/8773/0l12.jpg[/img] movie one sheet style 'A' [img]http://imageshack.us/scaled/landing/401/x017.jpg[/img] movie one sheet style 'B' [img]http://imageshack.us/a/img197/4304/bhgz.jpg[/img]

ArnievsParadise

MemberOvomorphSep-09-2013 5:30 AM
one sheet for forgien markets [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/9028/9fds.jpg[/img] artwork for the Alan Dean Foster novel [img]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/257/3/a/arnold_schwarzenegger___alien_by_kriegdersterne77-d5enil6.png[/img]
Add A Reply
Sign In Required
Sign in using your Scified Account to access this feature!
Email
Password
Latest Images
Alien & Predator Alien & Predator Fandom
Alien Movie Universe Forums
Alien: Romulus
Alien: Romulus Discuss the new Fede Alvarez Alien movie here
Alien
Alien Discuss all things Alien here
Alien: Covenant
Alien: Covenant Discuss the Prometheus Sequel, Alien: Covenant
Alien FX TV Series
Alien FX TV Series Discuss the Alien FX TV series here!
Alien Games
Alien Games Discuss Alien games here
Alien 5 Movie
Alien 5 Movie Discuss Neill Blomkamps’s vision for Alien 5 here
Alien Movies
Alien Movies Discuss the Classic Alien Films
Prometheus
Prometheus Everything About Prometheus
Prometheus Fan Art
Prometheus Fan Art Artwork & Fiction From the Fans
Hot Forum Topics
New Forum Topics
Highest Forum Ranks Unlocked
Xenotaris
Xenotaris » Praetorian
86% To Next Rank
ninXeno426
ninXeno426 » Praetorian
62% To Next Rank
Thoughts_Dreams
Thoughts_Dreams » Neomorph
85% To Next Rank
MonsterZero
MonsterZero » Xenomorph
91% To Next Rank
Neomorph
Neomorph » Chestburster
76% To Next Rank
Latest Alien Fandom Activity

Alien: Covenant is a sequel to 2012's Prometheus as well as a prequel to 1979's ALIEN. Alien fans looking to know more about Alien: Covenant should check back often. Alien-Covenant.com is an information resource for film enthusiasts looking to learn more about the upcoming blockbuster Alien: Covenant. Providing the latest official and accurate information on Alien: Covenant, this website contains links to every set video, viral video, commercial, trailer, poster, movie still and screenshot available. This site is an extension of the Alien & Predator Fandom on Scified - a central hub for fans of Alien and Prometheus looking to stay up-to-date on the latest news. Images used are property of their respective owners. Alien: Covenant, Prometheus and its associated names, logos and images are property of 20th Century Fox and are in no way owned by Scified and its related entities. This is a fan-created website for the purpose of informing and exciting fans for Alien: Covenant's release. If you have any questions about this site, its content or the Scified Network in general, feel free to contact Scified directly.

© 2024 Scified.com
Sign in
Use your Scified Account to sign in


Log in to view your personalized notifications across Scified!

Transport To Communities
Alien Hosted Community
Cloverfield Hosted Community
Godzilla Hosted Community
Jurassic World Hosted Community
Predator Hosted Community
Aliens vs. Predator Hosted Community
Latest Activity
Forums
Search Scified
Trending Articles
Blogs & Editorials