Prometheus: Battle for Paradise

Hello! I'm a bit in error will not write because they do not speak English very well, spying a translator I do not know. Well, it's not important, that's what I wanted to write: I wrote a second script of the film, which attempt to iron out all the moments in the first film were ruthlessly removed and stripped of meaning and logical chain. Unfortunately translate fully into English I can not, but you can through the Google translator to try to read if do not know the Russian language. So what to expect? This is my version of events. I hope you enjoy it. Prometheus: The Battle for Paradise A month after the departure of Engineers Elizabeth on the planet, planetoid LV223 arrives on the second team, which was a spare link in the cunning plan of creation of Weiland - Peter Weiland. ---------------------------------------------------- [url=http://yadi.sk/d/Z24rmkDE5B44k]Original in Russian language can be downloaded here[/url] ================================ The following is a translation Google-translator. ================================== A month after the departure of Engineers Elizabeth on the planet, planetoid LV223 arrives on the second team, which was a spare link in the cunning plan of creation of Weiland - Peter Weiland. After landing on the planet the first thing they find out that the fallen spaceship engineer can not run because they do not know how to manage it, even though copies of the reports of David and went immediately to the ground and a second ship, the android without them there is nothing to do there. And apparently Shaw and Android disappeared from the zone of visibility "beacon" David, going in a completely transcendent universe, where apparently no one has ever flown. Inspection of the ship and the horseshoe of the buildings has been very carefully and now the team is not as mad rush to the germ-snakes with shrieks of "my darling". In the main hall found the remains of decomposed bodies of several members of the team, "Prometheus," and that the most important thing - the most by Peter Weiland. Low strong combined with a beautiful figure of a girl came to the remains (* I do not want to call it a decomposed body, then I would roil) Weiland and asked, what do we have here with the indicators? It's all right, ma'am, all data as we have on earth. There is air and it is suitable for breathing. Chemical agents have been identified, you can remove the helmet. The commander of the ship "Hercules" took off her helmet and put it on the launch pad, "Horseshoe" (ship engineers). -That's it, Father, you yourself have found that so long sought. Bending down to the remains of a beginner she took off smolder suit small plate attached to a metal exoskeleton suit made specifically for the patient Weiland. Out of it in the hands of the plate she put it in his breast pocket, simultaneously thinking what secrets she's hiding, and that there may be. The commander-Uikers we found rescue unit! Not far from the ship, the 600-meters with t. It is not damaged externally, forward guidance. -Check it out for the living and be careful, keep a few people from the outside for the insurance. If that - blow it, we do not want any trouble. Stay in touch so we can watch what's happening. -Yes, ma'am. We are entering. The doors of the docking module walked away without any effort. Automation worked correctly. Four people walked slowly through the corridors of the capsule. The hallway was completely littered with some burn-through, and sometimes even ate the metal. In the main hall waiting for their unforgettable sight. Many, it will then pursue in nightmares. Under the ceiling woven web of a sticky substance, and there were several bodies of people apparently are the last members of the crew of Prometheus. The corpses had been partially eaten to the bone, and sometimes completely absent of the body. And in the midst of all this chaos in the skiff sailor sort of cobbled together from such and such a web, lay a dark gray creature with a long head in the shape of a banana. Uikers: this is something new, take as much as possible alive. -There Ma'am. Wakes up the creature ... Begins shooting .. Mochilovo and moving through the narrow corridors of the small rescue capsule about 10 minutes of screen time. All logged die a terrible death from a broken sternum to the eaten brains with an abundance Krovischi! Uikers: a support group! Pop the module to the dogs, we climbed back where it should not, I'm not sure that we survive Select this out. -Ma'am, charges are laid, we were only waiting for the signal. Undermine .... Shi ... landowner ... xp .. Images on monitors disappeared people that were in the horseshoe heard over the hull of a ship buzz and shake the earth. Uikers-all then turn off and go to Hercules. Hercules, say that outside? Module destroyed? It is wall-dust nicherta not see, Ma'am. But judging by the analyzers, everything exploded on the 200 meters, probably in the module load power generator. Sonderkommando does not answer, apparently, they were killed in the blast. -One more thing, ma'am. We found her, she crushed with a heavy object, possibly hit by the module when he ejected. Or, when the ship fell to the ground, because everything speaks to the fact that he was shot down. The group quickly went from the ship engineers, leaving everything as it is and not taking away anything superfluous. Uikers last looked at her father, and hurried to the door. -Commander, outside everything is clean, the module is not in place, there is a funnel with a diameter of 300 meters. Send troops to accurately ascertained on the spot. -We go to Hercules, check and all on board, we need more time to look around the surrounding areas. Perhaps there is something else that we missed when they came to the lighthouse of the module. Special forces moved into the area survey and a step-by-step examined territory. -We got injured! He has a broken rib cage but he is alive. Pulse weak, an urgent need in the infirmary. -Wait in place now will have a car, look around, maybe someone else survive? There were four outside the module, could it all be lost? -Another two bodies were discovered. Or rather one and a half .. -I do not get. Uikers looked at the monitor and it almost threw up on deck. Lying on the sand with the upper half of the commandos fired bald head covered with blisters from burning. Hands clenched into convulsions something. It was something like a stick or bone, which was included in the chest and out the other side. A second, also a corpse? No, he is conscious but does not say anything, his eyes were deified and the campaign he was deaf. A car drove up, two put back into the body, and the riot police got on the sides of the car. With a police escort, they returned to Hercules and wounded immediately went to the hospital. The first stated the full and partial loss of vision stunning, which was soon to pass. The second with a broken sternum did not submit hopes, but all the same doctors decided to operate on him, and if possible to bring back to life. An hour later the doctor came out of the hospital and went to the captain's cabin. He was holding a small cylinder, tightly wrapped in a white cloth. -It was inside of him, ma'am. We do not know what it is and how it got there, but just in case it pinned hypnotic and preserved in alcohol in the flask. It is safety glass, like so whatever it was, he did not get out of it. Uikkers all peered into the flask trying to understand what kind of a creature when she was summoned by videophone. -Captain, we have removed information from both, you can go? -On my way. Putting aside the capsule standing near a small sealed modular wardrobe, she ambled out of the cabin and went to the bridge. There she was already waiting for equipment and picked up a few Hercules team. -What could - restored, the rest was destroyed by an explosion and acidic atmosphere. First, we'll show you what happened next module. Picture of the monitor came to life from a gray background by becoming a three-dimensional (on the bridge was the latest 3D-surround screen). Went sound recording: -Explode! And then the door opened a gateway, not even opened and was burned a bit of acid, which in itself is incredible, material that does not burn in the atmosphere can not be so quick to spoil anything. From the opening formed in the special forces, then popped up the very essence of what was hanging in the module under the deck head. Growth of more than 2 meters, with small front limbs resembling human hands, it sank into one of the soldiers pierced his jaw sliding through the chest! -Wait, is it possible to play back frame by frame here this time? Technicians clicked buttons and start recording played very slowly, step by step how to time-lapse photography. Being slowly opens his mouth, he opened his teeth, jaw and pushed a bit, it opens it (jaw) out of it slowly pushed the other is smaller, and so the same is pushed forward. This is similar to the principle of a piston or a hydraulic cylinder when one puts one smaller). Here is a small jaw for the chest, not even for a simple all in some kind of slime burns through it! Standing behind the crew began to be baptized, and flew the phrase "Lord, my God! God forbid you to meet." Clearly, now including normal speed, that there was more? Went normal speed and everyone saw it as being one hit through the chest seized on another studded tail and ripped in half. Then there was a bright flash and the image disappeared. -It was a blast, there's nothing else on the record. Now look what we found in your android-double. The screen flashed a picture. "Stop, I order you not to ram!" -If you still want to live - Quickly Get out of my ship! The rescue capsule will shoot after getting the ship into the air, the module will be enough for a few months before the second command. Do you understand? Running from the ship, but the real guys will do something that is very necessary. We will not let him take off from the surface. The camera flashed through the corridors of "Prometheus" and showed a room escape pods. In order neural Android wore a suit and well as quickly shoved into the module and pressed the reset lever. A little shake ... module slipped-turned, the motion has stopped. The top cover of bummed up and the camera moved up from a lying position to a vertical. Took a little bit to the side, his eyes looked a memorable picture appeared. Horseshoe-shaped spaceship creators slowly gained altitude and it all go cosmo-engine crashed "Prometheus." A huge explosion rocked the trim horseshoe and the ship began to slowly fall to the planet simultaneously rolling over the edge. What is most interesting, many have noted that Prometheus broke into small fragments and at the horseshoe was not the slightest damage. From what he's done? Horseshoe fell rapidly past the cameras filming all this is happening ran Elizabeth Shaw. She was pale and looked exhausted. -Run! He's going to fall and crush us! The camera turned quickly for Elizabeth and started running. Android is briefly turned around to see what's back there and how long to run. Elizabeth stepped aside from the race strongly curtailed the fall and scroll horseshoe. Android no luck turned around she saw a gray trim that holds it and break all connections, pressing into the soil of the planet. The camera shows the last cry, and then came darkness. * And now the Director's Cut! Then everything can be used as a huge spoiler! The darkness was asleep showing rolled away on a horseshoe. There was a loud sound of falling and then rising into the air fog of dust. A few minutes later snatched the camera face flustered Elizabeth, bruised, she looked like a martyr. -I always suspected that you're not human. What are you bitch! Or do you live and is the same as this robot? If you're looking at it now, remember - they have created, but they also want to kill us. Just fly away from this planet and forget all that is seen here. Picking up a huge rock it several times with a crash dropped him on his head android until the camera goes off ... On the bridge there was a silence. No one expected to see and hear this from the mouth of the very scientific. And she did a good will gesture to android do not suffer or intentionally destroyed? -Ma'am, you may? -What is it? -We have transcribed the records of what you gave us. -Throw me at my computer in my cabin, it's personal - others should not see. Disk I understand you do not need it, return it to me please. With a small silver plate, Uikkers put it in the pocket of his suit. Now, take off and explore the surrounding area, there must be something more interesting than these ruins. Team in a daze looking at the commander. -With all due respect, ma'am, not whether to do so as advised by Dr. Shaw? Asked the chief mate. -We need to be confident that what she said, and looking at her, I think she's crazy, or was badly frightened by the death of the entire crew. Anyway here I give the orders as head of the company, "Weiland" and the owner of this starship, all clear? Take off and explore the area! Hercules rumbled kosmodvigatelyami and gently took off, rising in height. After earning a couple of miles, they looked around and saw a small hill not far behind which lurks something, but from this point they have not seen it. Setting the direction of flight at these mountains Uikers went to his cabin, simultaneously recalling to warn the ship approaches the set point. In the cabin, including a computer, she saw a record file on the desktop. Having started playing, she began to delve into the fact that there will have to see her and hear ... -Commander, we flew, there is something incredible, we have not seen this! -On my way. Turning off the record file on the words: -My dear daughter, I go now to God, and maybe I'll be it, though and I am sure that they too are mortal, but David persuaded me to just ... " Meredith has appeared on the bridge just in time, all appeared a magnificent picture - plenty of room was strewn with huge circles with a bunch of leaves. And near each was a small pyramid, and crowned it all a huge statue of the Sphinx with a human face. -Oh, my God! Is this it? Then Egypt and the Mayan .. Many stood agape and with undisguised curiosity dug into a whole and not spoiled like a statue on the ground floor-man, half-lion. Near the Sphinx was a lot of space and it gave them a chance to land Hercules. -Sit down, go to investigate. All one needs to learn the ropes in place. The ship slowly and carefully sat down near the Sphinx careful not to touch it with their powerful engine nozzles. When the dust has settled a bit, out of the Hercules team of 20 people, including armed with machine guns and flamethrowers. Slowly approached the statue because the size was just incredible. recalling the memory is now in the same building in Giza, Meredith could not help thinking what on earth made a small copy of what is now before them. What they see - 10 times bigger and is made of some white stone that just did blinded when looking up, because the bright sun that penetrate through the atmosphere repulsed bright blinding rays in the eye. Pass between the legs could be seen enormous size, apparently intended for the Giants, for a height of about 5 meters and a width of about 6. The team went into the passageway and stopped at a blank wall with designs carved on it, so reminding them of what they had seen from a height when looking at this place. -If I understand correctly, a senior aide said, this place is - a spaceport, and the wall - shows the location of landing sites. -Then where are the ships themselves? Something we can not understand? Go to the small pyramids, maybe there will be something more interesting than this wall. Everybody left the room and went to the nearest pyramid. The entrance was the same size but the inside was not the wall, and a continuation of all-pass rolling in high narrow corridor. Rushing down the corridor all came out at a high and a huge empty hall. There ... There was nothing, nothing .. The vast empty space ... The team was at a loss, they expected to see something, and then nothing. Uikers: Divide and conducting searches of the rest of the buildings, we go in groups of 4 people. Hercules, as you hear, welcome! -We hear you fine, the picture is also seen by the way .. -Check the radar of the area, there is something similar to that ship that crashed? -Now check. Yes, there is a plan to have three objects, and in one of them a little bit of heat emission. Impression that his warm up. Pass you the coordinates of the three objects. -Uikers: Plan remains in force. Divide these three objects of 4, the other on the safety net there. Groups of 4 went to get the coordinates to the nearest objects. The two later returned with sad faces - a hangar for spacecraft in both cases littered with stones and need special appliances to get there. A third group, led by Uikers stubbornly remained silent and did not answer calls. Captain Hercules decided to go in search of the remaining group of 16 people, as they were armed with stronger and they were enough to kill anyone. Approaching the pyramid again tested indicators. Could be no mistake - all four of them were inside the huge facility and moved. Then why did not receive communication from them? Beware all went into a long hallway and slowly walking down the aisle noticed a slight vibration and warming the air. -It Uikers. Hercules answer! Answer us! Earned a connection at all at once. -This is a major Vilesov, Ma'am. We hear you fine, but you can not hear outside. We come to you for help. -Uikers: If you can see us on the radar we are waiting for you in the control room. Here we have an interesting situation there. Already-go, wait. The group quickly moved through the corridors of the ship has not noticed as they came out of the hangar and the corridor were in the ship itself. After a few minutes walk through the corridors, they finally got into a huge room where everything was shining and glowing. Could be seen in the middle of an object resembling a gun crossed with large armchair. And around this building was a three-dimensional hologram of the universe with planets. One point was burning red and gradually moved in space. Next to the chair-object were four headed Uikers. -Uikers: hike the ship passes the pre-start checks, but who manages them? We did not find anyone yet walked through the corridors of the ship. It gives free unnoticed until now-the-wall and door to the room is the Engineer. Tremendous growth, approximately 2-fold higher than man and is bald. Dressed in a suit that is fully pulsed and glowed with thin filaments. Seeing a group of people he was surprised and came closer to them, saying something along the way in a foreign language they. Here some had lost his nerve and started shooting. Engineer were injured infuriate and blows a few people hit your arms straight out to the wall of the room. Several die instantly, some people try to escape the ship in the opposite direction in which visitors come but are confused and fall into a huge hall where all the liquid, a bit of dirt on the floor and standing water. Uikers possible together with the major competition for ecosystems and still get in and out of the hangar, they rush to the standing nearby, "Hercules." With Hercules observed enchanting sight: the entire area near one of the pyramids suddenly began to diverge petals that how-to folding in the side, moving laterally inward-land. From the resulting opening began to rise, such as a horseshoe-shaped device they have seen before. There has earned relationship and they heard and saw the trio running the ship. -Hercules! Start the engines, we fly over them, they have our crew and maybe they fly after the show. The three men ran into the "Hercules" and he left the ground picking up speed. Meanwhile, in the most "Horseshoe" is a skirmish with the Engineer. Caught in the "wet room" to die from familiar to us already, "Worms, snakes." The rest are killed at the hands of the Creator (Engineer), though he was close to death. He returned to the flight control room, but he is attacked from above worm-snake crawled out of the "wet rooms". Compresses the throat and just did squeeze in through the mouth. He is struggling with cramp gripped it and continues to go to the control room. Barely crawled to a chair, he sat down at his hands and something maneuvering sets the course of the flight. Chair covers his space suit of armor for long flights. Both ships are gaining speed in and out of the atmosphere of the planet LV223 and rushing into space. The screen into two frames: one in its death agony is shaking in his chair engineer, the other is Uikers on the bridge and looks a record of what they took off in a vehicle, namely a star map and that most, the red dot that moves in space. -Uikers: you can determine exactly where it is? She asked technicians. -Yes, but we need time. Now we introduce your pictures of the sky and calculate the flight path. Again shows the "Hall of the Office" on the Horseshoe, but in full screen. In the last throes engineer waved his hand and caught the lever. The ship slowly began to lean closer to the course and fly up to a small planetoid. Further developments: The fall of horseshoes and breaking of the ship into several parts. High on the orbiting command "Hercules" watching the fall of a horseshoe on one of the planetoid. -Commander, we have finally finished scanning. The coordinates entered into the computer and are ready to make a route. -Uikers: how long it takes and whether we have enough fuel on the road? -We believe that if forced to go on the course, we will be able to catch up with them in about 2 years. Energy reserves should be sufficient. Uikers-route the route we're going to find Dr. Shaw and all the answers. Recent shots: a team falls in cryogenic capsules and starts freezing. Titles and went against them the picture: The camera moves slowly through the empty cabin of a ship and into the cabin Uikers. Tyra lost and a full picture on the screen. The camera flies closer to the box-capsule storage, all of which creeps a little mucus in the embryo of another. Its mouth opens and we hear a hissing sound. The screen is dark. The end of the film, titles ... After all the galleries: Distant planet (planetoid). The camera slowly approaching it goes through the whole atmosphere, grabs the image of a broken horseshoe ship. Flies in one of the ragged openings and moves along the corridor, is sent to the room with a chair and appears that, for the most joyful of all the picture: Chest Engineer torn from the inside and we see the germ of Alien ... The END? "Prometheus-3: The creators of" ...