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MemberOvomorphApr-10-2013 12:14 AMPrometheus 2 Pitch
After the disappearance of Weyland's Prometheus ship and mission. Yutani Corporation makes a hostile take over of the Weyland Corp. and sends a new ship to LV 223 The Akagi Maru
The ship has company scientists, government officials and military personnel.
Once arrived on LV 223 They find still alive in a an emergency cryo tube "Meredith Vickers"
Meredith recovers and shows the location of the Derelicts to the new team from the Akagi. She wants to go back and explains the horrors of what this place was but has no choice but to go with the Weyland-Yutani's crew to the closest Derelict
A second more advanced military android named Kato, was sent with the Akagi crew. After arriving at the destroyed crashed Derelict, Kato turns on one of the ships navigation systems.
The Kato finds a way to connect
to the ships mainframe and by accident Kato is linked to it and receives data and learns the truth to the Space Jokeyes and Human connection. Kato starts talking in a deep voice " The Space Jockeys were an advanced biological robots system created by superior beings from an old dying civilization. Humans were an improved version of the Space Jockeys. Modern human DNA was implanted in the Space Jockey as a reproductive vessel to be activated when they spread their seed. Humans carry the codes in their DNA for the Creator beings to come back when if they ever got destroyed.
The Humans were designed to destroy each other. To control over population an evil "envy gene" was implanted. The Space Jockeys wanted to destroy humans and the Creator.
Kato says that the Creator beings were beleived to be destroyed in a war by the Space Jokeys. The Creator beings released their ultimate weapon the Xenomorph.
The crashed Derelict space display hologram shows a flashing light in an orbit next to an apparent dead planet called LV 426. The crew of Akagi with Meredith decide to go.
Once in orbit close to LV 426 the Akagi crew and Meredith finds a Derelict ship to their surprise. Lights around the Derelict ship are flashing. A small door opens as an invitation. The Akagi crew goes in. Once inside the ship and at its cockpit conteol center the crew finds David!!
The Akagi crew looks worried as teenagers that made a mistake. David was dysfunctional with severe bite marks on his face.
Kato tries to connect to David with no avail. David is totally disfigured but finally he turns on and with the remaining eye watches them. David asks Kato to download his memories and turn him off.
Meredith asked David if another Engineer was on the ship?
David says No.
Meredith then asks him " Who brought you here? Davis answers Shaw.
After a few seconds later Kato turns around, drops David's head and faces the crew to say
"Are you willing to die to find your answers"
Meredith shouts out at Kato "What are you trying to say you stupid machine!
Where is Shaw? Is there another Engineer? Who piloted this ship?
Kato says I did with Shaw who brought me here.
Where is Shaw? Where is she??? Says Meredith.
Kato says "It is in the ship"
Shaw is no more!
What's in the Ship??? Says Meredith.
Kato says with a frozen and dead look "The Creator"
The Creator was waiting for us to be reborn!
To be continued....
Part II of Prometheus 2 Pitch
Kato started to twitch and opened his mouth as something was happening with his programing.
Kato frozed.
A female who is a military specialized robotics designer and a scientist called Machiko, who rushed to it and tried to stop Kato as it fell to its back with its eyes frozen.
The boarding party of 8 which included an African American biologist named James Wolf. James who was the lead scientist asked Machiko "What's wrong with him" as everyone gathered around Kato.
Machiko said "I don't know. I will try a full reboot of its systems and if nothings wrong then it should take a few minutes
Back in the Akagi a military technician was finishing her hot shower next to a huge laboratory. She stepped out naked from the female locker room and pulled her towel that had some sticky oily liquid on it.
Kira looked at it in disgust when she turned around and opened a large closet door to pull another towel when something scratched her hand and she said "ouch". She slowly turned on the light of the large closet to see a fully grown Deacon unfolding. Kira screamed and ran naked.
The Deacon was now grayish in color and its head looked like a human skull with no eyes and less pointier in its head as it was when it was born. The Deacon was very attracted to the strong smell off human flesh.
In the Akagi Maru's cockpit were the other 3 remaining occupants including its Captain. Captain Eito was drinking coffee and looking at the Derilict in wonder, when it's outer door entrance started to close.
"James, this is Eito!"
James sayed "Go ahead"
"James, the outer door of the Derelict ship is closing"
James said "What"
Kira was running naked through the hallways and screaming Eito, Charlie connect me to Eito!!! Eito heard the screaming over the intercoms and shouted her name back when she stopped in a four way hallway. Kira was looking scared out of her life while she stared at every all the empty hallways.
"Kira!! What's going on???
Eito!! There is something here that came with us from that fkg planet!!!
When she turned to face her back a slime fell on her head and when she looked up a large opened mouth with human looking teeth just snapped and bit her head off in a split second.
Eito heard a dumping sound over the mike and he continued to scream and ask Kira what is it?? Where are you?
No answer came.
Eito asked the main computer "Charlie, where is Kira? Eito my sensors indicate that her voices came from the cross hallway 4 deck level 2"
Charlie, show me that location. Eito and the other crew members saw the monitors in disbelief as blood was all over the walls and her body on the floor. All three Eito, Fumiko and Beniko grabbed high voltage taser shotguns and ran to her location.
They where running frantically to her location. Once there, Eito saw with sadness Kira's decapitated body.
Eito immediately pointed his weapon forward and said "Fumiko cover my Six. Where's Beni?" Fumiko said Sir he was just behind me!!
Eito said Charlie put me on loud speakers "Beniko!! Answer me!! Are you ok!! No answer. Answer me God dammit!! The loud noise bothered the Deacon and it screamed back with a loud shriek!!! Which spooked Eito and Fumiko.
The Deacon ran past one of the hallways.
Fumiko saw it as it passed by at the end of the hallway and he said "Sir we need to get the fk out of here fast"
Eito asked "What did you see? Sir it's huge"
Charlie I need you to find the location of the shrieking noise by blasting loud music and put my favorite heavy metal song at full blasts all over the ship except my location NOW!!!
Fumiko says " Sir that's going to push it here? Eito "Yes that's what I want"
Charlie started playing Welcome to the Jungle by Guns and Roses at full blasts.
The Deacon turned slowly into the Hallway facing Eito. Eito said "Fumiko my 12 now" Full electrical charge! Deacon charged but both Eito and Fumiko fired electrical wired pin cartridges and hit the Deacon in its head with a 20,000 volta. The Deacon fell on the floor trembling and moving towards them while shrieking when it's head exploded.
Eito and Fumiko looked at the dead Deacon and they were relieved.
Eito said "Charlie good job. Yes Sir, Is there anything else I can help you with"
Yes Charlie please stop the music and get me James Wolf on the speaker please. Charlie said "Yes Sir"
Eito! Yes, Charlie go ahead. Eito all coms are broken with the other 8.
Back in the Derelict.
James was calling for Eito with no response.
Meredith said "Did Eito just say that the air lock door just closed?
All the lights inside the cock pit went black.
Machiko said "Everyone please turn your helmet lights"
Meredith shouted at them "I didn't just survive a two year cryo tube to die in this fkg ship!! I'm leaving, who's coming with me NOW!
James looked at her and said "You will not be going anywhere before I kill you first"
To be continued
Prometheus 2 Part III
James was pointing a gun at Meredith
James are you fkg crazy. I will make sure you will burn for this!!!
James says "I am close to making the greatest discovery of mankind and i will not let a disgruntled little bitch get in the way with it"
Someone grabbed James from behind and grabbed his gun and pointed it at James head while james faced the others.
Drop your weapons!! Kato screamed at the two other military escort team members that where carrying Taser shotguns. Kato's voice was just like Daivd's.
Meredith asked David is that you?
David answered "Yes ma'am"
Meredith asked how can that be?
I was designed with a special trojan programing to take over Prometheus main program systems if necessary or in the event of imminent danger to Mr Weyland, you or the mission by the crew.
David, what happened to Shaw? Meredith asked.
Ma'am, Shaw was absorbed by the walls of this ship. This ship seams to be a living bio-mechanical laboratory.
Humans were an experiment that at one some point some Space Jockeys and as you call them Creators disapproved and revolted.
Meredith asked against who?
Back at the Akagi.
Finished securing all bodies in body bags in the lab biological containers.
Eito said " Fumiko I have to go to that ship to find the others.
Fumiko said "Are you crazy? That ship is probably full of those nasty things and if not for our ceramic floors, that thing's blood would've burned a huge whole through the ship's hull.
I have to see if I can open the door and get in. I'm suiting up.
Eito was at the huge door of the Derelicts ship's outer hull when he touched the door and after a few seconds it started to open.
Fumiko, called Eito"
Go ahead "Fumiko replied"
Fumiko, the door just opened and if I don't come back in 12 hours then blow this piece of Alien junk out of sky and go back with out us"
Fumiko said but Sir!!! Fumiko if I dnt come back that means we are all dead and you are next!!! You got me??? That's an order!!! Said Eito.
"Yes Sir" said Fumiko
Meredith, Meredith "Shaw's voice called in a thunderous sound Everyone was looking around with their flash lights when the ships cockpit lights turned on, illuminating the walls. There, in the ceiling was a scary but beautiful bio-mechanical woman forming.
(From H R Gigers Necronomicon half female half Alien design)
Out of the walls came this beautiful being in what appeared to have a light resemblance to Shaw's face.
Her body was fuming as to an extreme temperature as she stood up over 12 feet tall.
Everyone was just frozen in amazement.
When the being's eyes opened wide...
To be continued....
What do you think so far???
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Custodian
MemberOvomorphApr-10-2013 3:53 AMI'll give you this, "You're having a go."
:)
2013 sci-fi horror novels 'Custodian' and 'Tandem' available from Amazon, B&N, iTunes etc...
Membrane
MemberFacehuggerApr-10-2013 7:45 AMCool. Since the androids in the other films were in alphabetical order...
Ash - 'Alien'
Bishop - 'Aliens'
Call - 'Alien Resurrection' (edited thanks to nostromo001, have no idea why I put 'Alien 3' initially)
David - 'Prometheus'
... maybe Kato can be Eito or Etsuo or another Japanese name to keep in the same format. :-)
Haujobb - Membrane / Acretongue Remix
nostromo001
MemberOvomorphApr-10-2013 12:42 PMBenito Lopez Fondeur, I will give you credit for jumping into a new story featuring characters from Prometheus, and I found myself burning through it wondering what would happen next. There are some flaws though that need to be addressed: Meredith Vickers was clearly killed on LV223 after she ran on foot from the crashing Juggernaut which rolled over her. You can't avoid that fact, would that you could as I too would like to see her in Paradise. She is as very compelling character in all ways. You would have to come up with some way to explain what we all viewed such as a careful re showing of the last moments but now showing that what appeared to happen was not exactly what really happened. the ship rolled over her but she fell into an opening fissure that was created by the huge massive ship slamming into the surface of the planet, and then she was able to climb out off to the side after waking up some time later a few minutes following the departure of the second juggernaut. Her suit was still working so that is why she didn't run out of air. OK now you have Meredith Vickers to use in your new plot. Btw, to Membrane, Annalee Call appeared in Alien Resurrection or Alien 4, not Alien 3. OK back to the story. I am not feeling the Japanese influence or the Star Trek influence evidenced in the Maru part of the name of that ship, the Akagi Maru, which comes from one of the Star Trek movies like Star Trek 2 the Wrath of Khan as the name of the simulator training exercise called the "Kobayashi Maru".
The following paragraph contains many plot ideas and I want to deconstruct it stepwise:
"The Kato finds a way to connect to the ships mainframe and by accident Kato is linked to it and receives data and learns the truth to the Space Jokeys and Human connection. Kato starts talking in a deep voice " The Space Jockeys were an advanced biological robots system created by superior beings from an old dying civilization. Humans were an improved version of the Space Jokey. Humans were created for food."
For starters there is no character development of Kato, as in no details of his personality that would make him a compelling character like David is. Kato is also kind of a hokey name as it was over used in both James Bond movies and the Green Hornet. Secondly you have Kato learning one of the most critical pieces of information relating Alien franchise movies and Prometheus and yet there is no mention of what the connection exactly is. Third, you have the space Jockeys - in other words the Engineers, as inferior to human beings, and Engineers are biological robots to boot. Then you turn right around and say humans are also biological robots but superiot to Engineer models but this is followed by the fact that human beings are also just food!!? None of this really makes much sense and the rest of the story follows along with similar ideas. The fact that I read it all the way though shows me that there is a great interest from both me and others for new original storylines or sequels to Prometheus. There are many many different possibilities and directions a sequel can go and I am looking forward to reading more ideas. I also do not want to discourage you from writing you stories here. I just want you to think your stories through more before committing them to the electronic page. Good luck on the next installment. I will be reading it too.
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HICKS
MemberOvomorphApr-10-2013 1:18 PMkajkajaajakaajkajakajakajkaj is joke man
good job!
but , no pongas tanto yutani a la historia
Major Noob
MemberOvomorphApr-10-2013 4:48 PMNostromo- when the Juggernaut came down, it did so slowly, and the ground did not shake when it struck. I propose that it was virtually weightless at that time, that anti gravity was still in effect. I think Vickers is alive. For me, the only argument against that is that Charlize has not been mentioned for the sequel. Then again, that could be for a myriad of reasons, including secrecy. Remember too that whether or not she was human was never resolved.
Hicks- Jeez!
Benito- I've PM'd you.
nostromo001
MemberOvomorphApr-10-2013 7:01 PMMajor Noob, As much as I would like Vickers to be alive, I think we need to go with the straight forward explanation. The director clearly showed her getting crushed while Shaw rolled to the side. Also, while we like to speculate about Vicker's potential synthetic stastis, remember she was doing push ups at the beginning and she was shaking after she burned Holloway if you watch the deleted scene with Janek, a scene that I really wish they had left in. Synthetics do not shake period, and they don't need to do push ups. This issue has been debated and from everything that was presented, the evidence is strong that she is human. The only reason RS put a question in there was to generate debate among people like us.
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R.j.cobb
MemberOvomorphApr-10-2013 7:11 PMI just wrote a brilliant prometheus 2 story and none of it has gone down.
some website this is.
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MemberOvomorphApr-10-2013 7:54 PMPart II of Prometheus 2 Pitch
Kato started to twitch and opened his mouth as something was happening with his programing.
Kato frozed.
A female who is a military specialized robotics designer and a scientist called Machiko, who rushed to it and tried to stop Kato as it fell to its back with its eyes frozen.
The boarding party of 8 which included an African American biologist named James Wolf. James who was the lead scientist asked Machiko "What's wrong with him" as everyone gathered around Kato.
Machiko said "I don't know. I will try a full reboot of its systems and if nothings wrong then it should take a few minutes
Back in the Akagi a military technician was finishing her hot shower next to a huge laboratory. She stepped out naked from the female locker room and pulled her towel that had some sticky oily liquid on it.
Kira looked at it in disgust when she turned around and opened a large closet door to pull another towel when something scratched her hand and she said "ouch". She slowly turned on the light of the large closet to see a fully grown Deacon unfolding. Kira screamed and ran naked.
The Deacon was now grayish in color and its head looked like a human skull with no eyes and less pointier in its head as it was when it was born. The Deacon was very attracted to the strong smell off human flesh.
In the Akagi Maru's cockpit were the other 3 remaining occupants including its Captain. Captain Eito was drinking coffee and looking at the Derilict in wonder, when it's outer door entrance started to close.
"James, this is Eito!"
James sayed "Go ahead"
"James, the outer door of the Derelict ship is closing"
James said "What"
Kira was running naked through the hallways and screaming Eito, Charlie connect me to Eito!!! Eito heard the screaming over the intercoms and shouted her name back when she stopped in a four way hallway. Kira was looking scared out of her life while she stared at every all the empty hallways.
"Kira!! What's going on???
Eito!! There is something here that came with us from that fkg planet!!!
When she turned to face her back a slime fell on her head and when she looked up a large opened mouth with human looking teeth just snapped and bit her head off in a split second.
Eito heard a dumping sound over the mike and he continued to scream and ask Kira what is it?? Where are you?
No answer came.
Eito asked the main computer "Charlie, where is Kira? Eito my sensors indicate that her voices came from the cross hallway 4 deck level 2"
Charlie, show me that location. Eito and the other crew members saw the monitors in disbelief as blood was all over the walls and her body on the floor. All three Eito, Fumiko and Beniko grabbed high voltage taser shotguns and ran to her location.
They where running frantically to her location. Once there, Eito saw with sadness Kira's decapitated body.
Eito immediately pointed his weapon forward and said "Fumiko cover my Six. Where's Beni?" Fumiko said Sir he was just behind me!!
Eito said Charlie put me on loud speakers "Beniko!! Answer me!! Are you ok!! No answer. Answer me God dammit!! The loud noise bothered the Deacon and it screamed back with a loud shriek!!! Which spooked Eito and Fumiko.
The Deacon ran past one of the hallways.
Fumiko saw it as it passed by at the end of the hallway and he said "Sir we need to get the fk out of here fast"
Eito asked "What did you see? Sir it's huge"
Charlie I need you to find the location of the shrieking noise by blasting loud music and put my favorite heavy metal song at full blasts all over the ship except my location NOW!!!
Fumiko says " Sir that's going to push it here? Eito "Yes that's what I want"
Charlie started playing Welcome to the Jungle by Guns and Roses at full blasts.
The Deacon turned slowly into the Hallway facing Eito. Eito said "Fumiko my 12 now" Full electrical charge! Deacon charged but both Eito and Fumiko fired electrical wired pin cartridges and hit the Deacon in its head with a 20,000 volta. The Deacon fell on the floor trembling and moving towards them while shrieking when it's head exploded.
Eito and Fumiko looked at the dead Deacon and they were relieved.
Eito said "Charlie good job. Yes Sir, Is there anything else I can help you with"
Yes Charlie please stop the music and get me James Wolf on the speaker please. Charlie said "Yes Sir"
Eito! Yes, Charlie go ahead. Eito all coms are broken with the other 8.
Back in the Derelict.
James was calling for Eito with no response.
Meredith said "Did Eito just say that the air lock door just closed?
All the lights inside the cock pit went black.
Machiko said "Everyone please turn your helmet lights"
Meredith shouted at them "I didn't just survive a two year cryo tube to die in this fkg ship!! I'm leaving, who's coming with me NOW!
James looked at her and said "You will not be going anywhere before I kill you first"
To be continued
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MemberOvomorphApr-10-2013 7:59 PMThank you guys for the responses and great constructive critisisms. I hope you liked part 2 of my pitch that I just posted
Major Noob
MemberOvomorphApr-10-2013 8:03 PMBenito- rock on.
RJ- that appears to be your first post. Did you submit a story?
Nostromo- I know, I know. But one can dream. And she wouldn't need to be a synthetic to survive te scenario I'm suggesting. Both she and Shaw get run over by the giant cast iron Tumor. Both times, we get the shadowy horror of the Tumors hide rolling at us. Yes, Shaw is nearer the end, but not too much nearer. Yes, a rock stops it but hey, it's a rock. That's the JUGGERNAUT. The equivalent of two skyscrapers joined at the ass. Shaw should be equally squished.
I'm just playing around with it, I hope the sequel will take me miles away from what I'm imagining. But I really love the idea that, sometime after Vickers gets out from under it, the Juggernaut shuts down and regains its weight, driving it deep into the ground.
One last point: Vickers put on a fresh suit. She had more air than Shaw.
Anunnaki50
MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 12:09 AMI know she (Meredith Vickers) is a living human being because why in Capt. Janeks mind would he have sex with a robot especially when he seems like an average normal man whos a sailor and he loves women. All sailors love the ladies but then again not all because we repealed "dont ask, dont tell" policy. JK
The Anunnaki were on the earth in those days--and also afterward--when the sons of God went to the daughters of humans and had children by them. They were the heroes of old, mighty men of high reno
Anunnaki50
MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 12:12 AMNo one mentioned that part where he schtuped her I have waiting to debate this since the beginning where we talked about her as 'if' she was a robot.
The Anunnaki were on the earth in those days--and also afterward--when the sons of God went to the daughters of humans and had children by them. They were the heroes of old, mighty men of high reno
nostromo001
MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 1:33 AMGod I would like to think a guy could tell the difference between a synthetic and a real girl!!!! I'm giving Janek some credit as an intelligent guy here. As long as we're dreaming up stories I'd like to cast myself in the sequel and I get with Meredith Vickers, who lives. lol.
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MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 1:52 AMOk guys my pitch is that Meredith survived by laying in between the ships cut line designs stucture and on loose soil. The ship pushed her barely inches down and cracked her helmet. Her ejection module was a crio tube with capacity of two years. Once the Derelict rolled to its side she wakes up after an hour. She walks to her tube and prepares it for long sleep. It starts a distress signal
Major Noob
MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 6:04 AMNostromo- I still haven't seen the deleted footage. Watched Furious Gods all the way through, but got no further. I've loaned my copy out to 5 different people, one of them just borrowed it again! I may have to go buy another one.
Anyway, the story I have without the extras is that Janek was invited to Vickers room. We can assume he went, and the scene everyone speaks of bears that out, but did they get together?
And I know this is not Bladerunner, but if we are taking all that is on the disc as gospel, there [i]is[/i] the suggestion that Weyland knew Tyrell. So I ask you, could Deckard tell the difference between a robot and a real girl?
The sequel and its contents are way beyond our control, so there really is no harm in coming up with alternative story lines, however wild they may be. Got one of my own coming up in a few days. Stay tuned!
R.j.cobb
MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 11:28 AMA deep space beacon relays data to Weyland Technicians on saturns moon titan, that the prometheus and nearly all crew have been destroyed.
officials gather on earth to form an emergency incident operation..
and a class 5 Zeus recovery vessel is engaged .
classified information is withheld as to why shaws bio signals and the synthetic operatives tracker appear to be moving away from the calparmos system.
The zeus class 5 is a duo combined vessel and 3 quaters into its journey the computer awakes the captain and six other crew members that a "split operation" is needed . one for the original destination and one to pursue shaw.
R.j.cobb
MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 11:38 AMThe zeus 5 rolls, splits into two craft and rescue units......
One half of the zeus heads for shaws trajectory..........
The original breaks into the destination atmosphere
and locates prometheus's wreckage and derelict.
a three man team investigates the engineer cairns while four
investigate the derelict.
there is upon first examination, no funeral ceremony of peter weylands
corpse ,..to make a funeral of. it soon is established that what was the remains of several humans has been violated and eaten ........
inside the cockpit .
there are numerous eggs inside the chamber and two of zeus's crew are infected....
R.j.cobb
MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 11:43 AMThe operation is called off and realisation of danger for the other zeus ships operation is made clear.
The 2 other infected crew members are stasised for the journey out
to shaws pursuers......
R.j.cobb
MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 11:54 AMZeus 2 enters a system of incredible destruction. smashed Moons and Deeply scored Planets orbit a central White Dwarf star.
a Dimly lit planet of rock and ice indicates this is the destination of Dr Shaws journey.
R.j.cobb
MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 12:00 PMUnder the thin veneer of Atmosphere.... This World is Apparently a victim of some Ancient War.
Residual Background radiation is Detected globally.
Great plains of sheet ice and Huge cathedral type mountains tower the sky. it is at the base of these mountains .. it appears there are the remains of immense Monuments and Monoliths of Humanoid sculptures all but smashed and long reduced to to rubble....
R.j.cobb
MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 12:10 PMLooking like a Image of Broken greek gods and Titans Arena..
the Zeus 2 sets down and establishes that Dr Shaws signals are Transmitting from somewhere underneath the surface of this odd valley of rubble and destruction.
the crew arm up and disembark the zeus 2 to investigate these 1000 feet high Humanoid Monuments...
R.j.cobb
MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 12:23 PMThis is Paradise and they are being Watched from above.
the small file of humanity can be seen in the centre of this valley and the watchers have been waiting and hoping for this moment.....
for they are the scarred relicts of this planets past. Monstrous abbherations and mutated Humanoid people.
They overwhelm the Zeus crew . casualties occur on both sides and
the rescue team are dragged into subteranean vaults and chambers.....
This worlds survivors have lost their technology. but understand who they once where.
they cannot fly Shaws docked Juggernaught and Shaw is still in the cryochamber untouched. worshipped by her beauty .
but most revealing of all is the frightening picture of Davids Head upon a Alter...
Speaking like some forgotten god and fear is apparent amongst these forgotten people....
R.j.cobb
MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 12:34 PMDavid has gone on some quasi god type role and appears to be psychotic.
causing the death of a zeus crew member by Ridiculed citation.
David speaks in about 53 differant dialects of language and fills the chamber with insane laughter.
David is a god now and believes in only Death.
for now he tells the Horrifying story of this world.....
He tells the truth that the Engineers are Death Smiths.
and their Biological Parasite Weapons who are the final evolution state of their maker.. where most feared of all... and of all the weapons Embargos and fleets of death that produced parasitic offworld organisms so deadly to carry, only a few returned.
until some species did something about their deeds of death and terraforming......
They where annhilated completely... well almost.
R.j.cobb
MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 12:50 PMSons of Gods .
David is re-united with his body by a Zeus synthetic crew member.
The signals of Zeus 1 is overheard and david becomes agitated.
He does not want the middle god. he wants the original. Here he can be god to the original god. a sort of Irony.
Zeus 1 enlightens down and connects to its parked sibling ship unifying them both into one...
The crew Disembark and engage the reception Hostility with Enormous Fire power bringing down Whole sections of Mountain face with the Zeus's cannon.
R.j.cobb
MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 1:07 PMZeus 1 crew engage the enemy and reach the subteranean bowels and release zeus 2 captives.
tracking information readings depict two approaching outside life forms of non human stature.
this creates confusion until it is realised by david with laughter that they have brought an interfering lesson on themselves.
all zeus 1 and 2 crew members are overcome by fresh resistance and their weapons thrown down a bottomless shaft........
more story to come upon interest//
nostromo001
MemberOvomorphApr-11-2013 11:40 PMMajor Noob, the difference between Tyrell's replicants and Weyland's synthetics is replicants are biological in origin, the enhanced parts and all biological and genetically enhanced, then cobbled together such as the eyes for example. On the other hand, Weyland made true robots that had that white goop and those round nodes visible when Ash lost his head. While a replicant would likely not be noticeable other than their enhanced physical strength during sex, a synthetic may not even have genitalia but if they did and effort was applyed to make them seem realistic, I have to suspect that a human would be able to tell the difference unless they went way out of their way to mask the synthetic's attributes. And here we are talking the unit would have to simulate the complete functioning of a human female for example. Thats a tall order and could be done at great expense. More likely they would simply make it not sexually function at all, as in no interest.
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